Thank you!
FYI I’ve left a few edit suggestions for earlier episodes on the ep11 torrent.
And a small correction for this episode: “if it's want you truly desire” should be “what”, not “want”.
Thank _you_ for all the work and for listening to comments!
Oh, I’ve just spotted another typo in ep06, but I guess it’s too late, oh well. “here in this world. pursuing the path” should probably have a comma instead of the full stop. And on that note, three lines later, I’d’ve added a comma before vocative “Kurumi”. _Edit:_ oh, and another in ep09: “we've doing”.
Ah, oh well. Next time I should maybe wait a day or two before putting out a final batch, just in case I (or anyone else) spot anything to fix. But sincerely thanks again for the corrections, it helps a ton.
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