Thanks!
08:13: “this world’s characters”? (“these”? “your”? just “kanji”?)
14:42: Great idea, but the timing/positioning can be improved: an easy step is adding ,23,398 at the end of the tag to fix the start and end frames (and you can actually merge the lines and use ,1733,2108), but the actual movement is nonlinear, so ideally you’d split this line frame by frame and \pos each frame. This instance is fairly easy to do by hand by following any of the vertical lines on the topaz, but motion tracking software can also be used. I got: 960, 977.9, 1023.2, 1088, 1164.4, 1244.4, 1319.8, 1382.2, 1425.3, 1441.5 (feel free to copy & paste).
14:50: Seeing how quickly they catch on to what he means, perhaps “I granted you”? Otherwise I would think of Precure powers if I were them. (The next line may also need adjustment if you change this.) If you want to stay ambiguous because we don’t actually know what’s caused this, maybe something like “you’ve gained”? so that it sounds more like it’s something _new_ that happened recently.
Thanks for the notes as always!
Yeah at 14:50, I was considering saying "I granted" but wasn't sure if I should commit to that, since it may turn out not to be true... But... I guess I can always go back and change it if future episode revelations require it...
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